Comments on: [Fiction] Friday: Lovers or Haters

By: Adrian

Adrian — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 00:49:24 +0000

Awesome! Very effective. Pulled me right in. Liked especially the part where the devil ended up inside him; the shift was very provocative.

By: paul

paul — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 15:52:33 +0000

The way you get under this guy’s skin is very powerful.
paul´s last blog ..Too Good To Be True

By: John Pender

John Pender — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 01:54:40 +0000

You know, this is the first thing of yours I’ve ever actually read. And I have to say I liked it. Good job!
I’m going to have to check out this Fiction Friday thing. Never heard of it.
John Pender´s last blog ..Vampires and Prostitutes

By: Sentient

Sentient — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 00:50:57 +0000

I love this. How the main fights for his true self but ended up hating what he had become. Powerful and can be casually related to any situation. Pretentious, but somehow defeated in a way.

By: CJT

CJT — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 18:59:12 +0000

This is fantastic, I really liked the take that you did on the baptism. I often times wonder how many people would follow a religion if they weren’t forced into it.

By: Carol

Carol — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 18:12:29 +0000

Very powerful story, Ben.
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By: Annie

Annie — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 15:20:28 +0000

Not so funny that we both referred to that claustrophobic feeling within one of those buildings…I enjoyed the POV you decided to take in telling this story – powerful and intimate.
mine took a bit of a twist while I wrote – it – but doesn’t everything? http://annieevett.blogspot.com/2009/12/first-blooding.html

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 11:54:21 +0000

am curious as to how the narrator ended up in the haters’ church (and their clutches).
Interesting take on the possession story
mazzz_in_Leeds´s last blog ..#FridayFlash: Witness