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	<title>Comments on: How Do I Edit?</title>
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	<description>The blog of Melbourne horror writer and Marxist revolutionary, Benjamin Solah</description>
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		<title>By: Ralph Pines</title>
		<link>http://www.benjaminsolah.com/blog/?p=1117&#038;cpage=1#comment-47112</link>
		<dc:creator>Ralph Pines</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2009 14:48:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Readers/Reviewers are a must. My first Beta stage was somewhat lackluster in that only one person gave me a detailed analysis of what I wrote and I heard little or nothing from the rest. I hope to have better luck the next time around.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Ralph Pines&#8217;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://ralfast.wordpress.com/2009/05/25/how-do-i-edit/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;It’s a mistake! Time to edit.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Readers/Reviewers are a must. My first Beta stage was somewhat lackluster in that only one person gave me a detailed analysis of what I wrote and I heard little or nothing from the rest. I hope to have better luck the next time around.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Ralph Pines&#8217;s last blog post..<a href="http://ralfast.wordpress.com/2009/05/25/how-do-i-edit/" rel="nofollow">It’s a mistake! Time to edit.</a></em></abbr></p>
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		<title>By: Benjamin Solah</title>
		<link>http://www.benjaminsolah.com/blog/?p=1117&#038;cpage=1#comment-47109</link>
		<dc:creator>Benjamin Solah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2009 06:29:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Nat. They are! I&#039;m a stationary junky and the red pens look so bright on the page.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Nat. They are! I&#8217;m a stationary junky and the red pens look so bright on the page.</p>
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		<title>By: Natalie L. Sin</title>
		<link>http://www.benjaminsolah.com/blog/?p=1117&#038;cpage=1#comment-47108</link>
		<dc:creator>Natalie L. Sin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2009 06:28:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I really need to get one of those red pens. They sound snazzy : )</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really need to get one of those red pens. They sound snazzy : )</p>
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		<title>By: Benjamin Solah</title>
		<link>http://www.benjaminsolah.com/blog/?p=1117&#038;cpage=1#comment-47107</link>
		<dc:creator>Benjamin Solah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2009 03:31:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Definitely. My writing really started coming forward when I began seeking thorough critical edits other than this is good, or this is bad.

They point out things and patterns in your writing that you don&#039;t notice exactly because they are patterns and you get used to them.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Definitely. My writing really started coming forward when I began seeking thorough critical edits other than this is good, or this is bad.</p>
<p>They point out things and patterns in your writing that you don&#8217;t notice exactly because they are patterns and you get used to them.</p>
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		<title>By: Isaac</title>
		<link>http://www.benjaminsolah.com/blog/?p=1117&#038;cpage=1#comment-47106</link>
		<dc:creator>Isaac</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 28 May 2009 03:29:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Other peoples&#039; opinions are very necessary, aren&#039;t they? They have the advantage of having no emotional investment in the work and no familiarity with it.

&lt;abbr&gt;&lt;em&gt;Isaac&#8217;s last blog post..&lt;a href=&quot;http://isaacespriu.com/2009/05/27/and-another-day-flashes-past/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;And another day flashes past&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/abbr&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Other peoples&#8217; opinions are very necessary, aren&#8217;t they? They have the advantage of having no emotional investment in the work and no familiarity with it.</p>
<p><abbr><em>Isaac&#8217;s last blog post..<a href="http://isaacespriu.com/2009/05/27/and-another-day-flashes-past/" rel="nofollow">And another day flashes past</a></em></abbr></p>
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